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It's hard to be a young hero.

I grew up reading and rereading comics of teen superheroes. In more recent years, I greatly enjoyed DC's Stargirl TV show (and pointedly ignored their Titans series). But nowadays, I'm reluctant to visit great comics like New Teen Titans or Young Justice, knowing what's going to be visited on these characters later in life.

Dick and Kory's lovely romance is going to end up reduced to a cheap hook-up. Wally will do well for himself for a long while, only to be glibly tossed aside and even reduced to a mass shooter in order to prop up Barry Allen as the one true Flash (thankfully, this has been amended--still, fuck you, Tom King). The irascible Core 4 of Kon-El, Tim Drake, Bart Allen, and Cassie Sandsmark will receive similar treatment: traumatized, orphaned, sexually assaulted, killed off, character assassinated, or even made to date Bernard. I don't follow comics as closely as I used to, but I understand characters like Miles Morales, Kamala Khan, Invincible, and Spider-Gwen are in similar states.

Now, trials and tribulations are a natural part of any adventure story. These characters can't just sit around and do each other's hair all day. But it seems some writers take a perverse glee in giving these heroes 'character development' designed to make them more cynical, darker, more brooding, more traumatized, less idealistic. Like the natural endgame for these characters should be that they're mini-Batmans (or mini-Rorschachs) instead of being their own individuals.

Mary Marvel and Speedball got particularly egregious treatments, although I hear they're thankfully more recognizable these days.

So I wanted to write a comic about a young hero who may face hardships, but retains his innate optimism, warmheartedness, and sense of fair play as he becomes a true icon.

I also wanted to go the other direction--or, I don't know, the Tenet direction--and examine an older hero who is forced to retire, but still remains a positive figure. With a lot of these veteran heroes, their miseries compound to the point where it seems like they would love to retire, but this is taken as a sort of defeatism... to say nothing of how the readership keeps wanting to see them in action...

I don't know, they seem to be kept in this perpetual second act of unresolved misery. Superman and a few others have been allowed to grow--remaining heroes, but entering into stable relationships, starting families, and so forth. I wanted to do a version of that where a hero might progress past being 'iconic,' in the sense of still doing exactly what they did in the Silver Age, but they still contribute to society, find happiness, and uphold their convictions.

And I'm not going to pretend I'm the only person writing optimistic, lighthearted superhero material... but I think we can agree there's always room for one more silly superhero story.

So think of this as a webcomic without the comic. I hope I'll find an artist to hook up with one of these days, but for now, I'm just going to pick away at the writing and hope people like it.
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Been writing sporadically. I've gotten a lot of commissions done--more still due, but I'm putting aside the pipe dream of getting them all done before working on the novel and instead trying to do one installment, then a chapter, and so forth. I got two thousand words written yesterday, which is uniquely frustrating, because if I could write that way all the time, I'd be unstoppable. But I need to recharge my batteries.

There's another project I'm working on, a Peter/MJ story which is gathering a lot of fans. I've got it all outlined and I'm being pretty self-indulgent with it at the moment, just writing for the fun of it. I think I might strip the serial numbers off eventually, though how I'll do it remains to be seen. It could be as simple as changing some names, but the thing is, I've got a genre shift planned for midway through the story and it's not very integral to the premise, it's just something I want to write. So if this fic ends up being, like, crazy long, I might finish it and split it into two stories for de-serial-number-ification. As long as either slice is around 60,000 words, I'm golden.

I could bolt on a simple third act to the romantic comedy first half, and then put a new opening on the more adventure-y second half. And that would leave me with one story that's pure rom-com and one that's more of a romantic thriller... sorry, I'm quickly growing to hate these genre buzzwords, as I think anyone who's been in contact with a publisher must. "We want a romantic thriller, but not a suspense thriller." That kinda thing. Tiresome.

I might get really funny and make one a lesfic book and the other Christian fiction, cuz I've always wanted to try my hand at that. I just have to write better than Left Behind. I can write better than Left Behind.

October 20

Oct. 20th, 2023 02:48 pm
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I actually have been writing pretty steadily, both commissions and novel stuff, then this morning I sit down and bang out a two thousand word fanfic for no reason. What the hell?

August 31

Aug. 31st, 2023 07:18 am
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Did some more brainstorming and I think I've come up with a way to trim down my story. I'll lose some stuff that I like, but I think it'll be crisper. At the moment, though, I'm mostly day jobbing.

Justified: City Primeval wrapped up and I fear it's another case of "this season of television could've been a season premiere" (don't they know that Prestige TV is over?).

Spoilers. )

August 25

Aug. 25th, 2023 02:51 pm
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I wrote a good 700 words yesterday, and around 1500 words today, though it'd hard to tell. I went back and rewrote/added to my last chapter, which I think flows better now. It'll work a lot better when I go back and add in this subplot I have planned (more on that later), but right now I'm plunging on ahead. I think it's safe to say I've written two thousand words at least within 48 hours, so I think I'm entitled to lunch.

August 21

Aug. 21st, 2023 12:03 am
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Got about five hundred words written today. I've made other progress, but I've been bad about marking it down. Though I've also taken some mental health time. I played Hi-Fi Rush, which was a lot of fun, and Medal of Honor: Airborne, which was also nice. It's weird to think of MOH being so arcade-y as to have supernazis stalking around with chainguns. Now, I am a filthy casual, but Airborne does an interesting thing of having an almost open-world system, where you can just about choose where your character parachutes in and then go about the level as you like. And when you respawn, it's usually not at a checkpoint--you parachute in again.

There were still some hinks, like respawning enemies, so if you miss an objective and move on, you'll have to fight your way through another mass of Nazis to get back to it. But still, it's a fun idea. I'd love to see it in a setting with the drop pod trope, like Starship Troopers or ODST, so you can go really OTT with dropping down from orbit and landing wherever.

With that in mind, I also got some work done on my screenplay. It's hard keeping it even within friend zone distance of historical accuracy, since I want both US main characters and Dracula in Transylvania, but I think I managed a decent explanation as to why anyone with an American accent would be within spitting distance of Romania. (Sure, I could explain that this is Dracula's Italian castle or something, but like that's any fun.)

Anyway, here's the text scroll/voiceover from the first scene. It admittedly falls a bit short of sheer fact, but I'm going for Clint Eastwood realism, not realism-realism.


THE 6615 RANGER FORCE WAS THE FIRST AMERICAN SPECIAL FORCES. THEY WERE KNOWN AS THE BLACK DEATH BY THE ITALIANS THEY FIRST FOUGHT.

AFTER SEEING ACTION IN NORTH AFRICA AND ITALY, THE RANGERS WERE SENT INTO CISTERNA, WHERE THEY WERE AMBUSHED BY SUPERIOR GERMAN NUMBERS.

OF THE 767 MEN IN THE BATTALION, ONLY A HANDFUL AVOIDED DEATH OR CAPTURE. WITHOUT ENOUGH MANPOWER TO FIELD SO MUCH AS A PLATOON, THE 6615TH WAS OFFICIALLY DISSOLVED.

THE FEW UNINJURED RANGERS WERE TOO UNRULY FOR THE INFANTRY AND TOO EFFECTIVE FOR THE STOCKADE.

ARMY COMMAND SENT THEM INTO YUGOSLAVIA, TO SUPPORT TITO’S PARTISANS AGAINST THE NAZI OCCUPATION.

THEIR RANKING OFFICER WAS TOLD TO PREPARE THE PAPERWORK FOR POSTHUMOUS COMMENDATION BEFORE THEY LEFT.


August 4th

Aug. 4th, 2023 07:57 am
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Probably be seeing The Meg today. After five years of horror movies about trauma, I'm ready for a horror movie about what if a shark were really, REALLY big.

TMNT... meh. I have love for the eighties cartoon and the live-action movies, but this new one isn't it, bro. I hear the argument that every TMNT incarnation changes things about for the new generation--dude compared it to Star Wars, which let's not even get into--but I feel it's the other way around in this case?

No kid growing up actually wanted to be the kid sidekick. Who wants to be Robin when you can be Batman? Mutant Mayhem looks like a whole movie of adults looking back at childhood and not trying to tell a story about it to children, but to nostalgic adults (sorta like how She-Ra and Owl House and all those other 'brave' cartoons are really for slashers, not kids).

Like, it's trying to do Stranger Things with the Turtles. And I accepted that with Ghostbusters, but with the Turtles? No. Too much squeaking, squealing kids, proving that the Western action cartoon really is dead. (Thanks for trying to resuscitate it, Gennedy, but...)

And obviously, other TMNT cartoons weren't grim and gritty, but they weren't so front-loaded with the childishness. It feels so skewed to the Teenage in the title, to the point that the brothers are indistinguishable from each other, all a bunch of adolescents straight out of Super 8 or any of those other 'nostalgic' movies that aren't about anyone's childhood, but about watching Amblin movies when you were a kid. Just admit it: you didn't ride your bike that much and you know it.

Nothing but a bunch of fucking jokes because Seth Rogen is too high to commit to the Bit. Can someone please Justin Roiland this guy already?

And a weird emphasis on Splinter's sex life, because why should an old widower/gruesomely mutated man/Buddhist monk be celibate? When we can make a joke about Splinter fucking? Why should this character have dignity and gravitas when we can ruin everyone's sense of immersion in the story for sex jokes?

August 3rd

Aug. 3rd, 2023 07:46 am
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Making some good progress lately, with a little under a thousand words written each day this month. I've also been walking the dog a mile-plus, even if I have to do it at night when the sun stops trying to kill.

Speaking of dehydration, had a galaxy-brain moment. I bought a, frankly, ridiculous 40oz tankard. Folks, if this were an episode of Columbo, it'd be a murder weapon.

Normally, when I sit down for a spell, I have a tall glass of water, I drink it, I forget about it--end up dehydrated. Not anymore.

I fill up my tankard--I wish I could've found one of those dumb Viking drinking horns or Prancing Pony mugs, because I am at least that much of a consoomer, but none of them were the right size. I sit down to read or game or watch a show. I have, essentially, a never-ending supply of water until I have to get up again. It's great. I gave blood the other day and they got my blood in half the usual time.

Oh yeah. It's all over for you bitches.

I also came up with a strong look/concept for a superhero character I haven't been satisfied with yet. Waiting for the concept art on that.

I'm also brainstorming this female space marine novel--pretty much a tribute to the Vasquezes and Dizzy Floreses of the genre--and came up with a way to incorporate these two characters from later on in the timeline. You'll see them in another book as an old married couple, but if you read this book, you get to see how they first met.

But that can wait. Right now, my mandate is focusing on quick, under-200 page books I can actually sell and make money off of. And hopefully find an agent who is willing to take a chance on my more experimental stuff later on.

It feels ridiculous that I can't sell fantasy or sci-fi when the biggest stuff out there is Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, even Game of Thrones... but if the people want romance, who am I to judge? I haven't been cancelled by Booktok yet, so I might as well take advantage of my level of acceptance while I can. There's always time to be an iconoclast later on.

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